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Nathan Pulliam
United States
We were dried, salted
slit sideways and spilled
no insides out.

And then I knew
we were such empty shells.

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I am genuinely grateful for any fave that I get, so if I don't thank you individually it is because I hate the feeling that I'm mass replying cookie cutter thanks. But know that I do appreciate the support very much.
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talk to me about line breaks. I'm reading a lot of pieces with line breaks that I don't understand from a poetic standpoint and I'm curious about what people look to achieve with their choices.

I think they are such a key part of free verse, and I'm very open to the possibility that there are valid goals and approaches other than my own. These are the things I think about:

where is the natural pause in the cadence?
can I create positive emphasis on a word or phrase without wrecking the cadence?
can I create alternative/dual meanings without wrecking the cadence?
is there a structure I want for shape or uniform line length? if so, does my phrasing suit the structure? bolded because I think it's important.

What do you guys think about?

How do you measure success with your own writing? (yuuupp, I have premium again) 

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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner 22 hours ago  Professional Writer
Thanks for faving my work.
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rider-on-the-storm Featured By Owner 4 days ago
finally, another poet i enjoy reading on dA!
very few and far on this site these days.
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peaseblossoms Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
Hello!! 8'D Thank you so much for the watch... I really appreciate your interest in my work!!! <33333333333333 QvQ It means so much to me!
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bubblemoth Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you for joining :iconthewrittenrevolution:, we're delighted to have you with us. Welcome to the revolution. I salute you!

We're quite a busy group. We regularly post prompts and publishing opportunities for our members to try. Don't forget to drop into theWritten Revolution chat room as well!

And feel free to add us on Facebook and TwitterI am a dummy!
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Lissomer Featured By Owner Edited Jul 17, 2014   Writer
I'm kind of swooning a little lot over the music section in your interests. And also to a slightly lesser extent your TV section - The Newsroom is one of my favourite shows! :eager: 
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