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Nathan Pulliam
United States
We were dried, salted
slit sideways and spilled
no insides out.

And then I knew
we were such empty shells.

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I am genuinely grateful for any fave that I get, so if I don't thank you individually it is because I hate the feeling that I'm mass replying cookie cutter thanks. But know that I do appreciate the support very much.
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talk to me about line breaks. I'm reading a lot of pieces with line breaks that I don't understand from a poetic standpoint and I'm curious about what people look to achieve with their choices.

I think they are such a key part of free verse, and I'm very open to the possibility that there are valid goals and approaches other than my own. These are the things I think about:

where is the natural pause in the cadence?
can I create positive emphasis on a word or phrase without wrecking the cadence?
can I create alternative/dual meanings without wrecking the cadence?
is there a structure I want for shape or uniform line length? if so, does my phrasing suit the structure? bolded because I think it's important.

What do you guys think about?

How do you measure success with your own writing? (yuuupp, I have premium again) 

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bubblemoth Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Writer
Thank you for joining :iconthewrittenrevolution:, we're delighted to have you with us. Welcome to the revolution. I salute you!

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Lissomer Featured By Owner Edited 5 days ago   Writer
I'm kind of swooning a little lot over the music section in your interests. And also to a slightly lesser extent your TV section - The Newsroom is one of my favourite shows! :eager: 
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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hello Nathan.  Thanks for faving To Entwine.  Have a great week and one of these.... :highfive:
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Braxton-T-Rutledge Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
thank you
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you again for the favorite and the feature and the feedback! You are spectacular. :)
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