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bird, we pray so literate

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dead apples line an interstate heart
ten rotting cores coarsely coursing
tracks worn deeply by imaginations bounding
into mouths and slickly carved mountains
black with blood ferment   the ferryman awaits

take take

take me on pinchriver salts  stones rolling lull
one more mile  to empty bed and empty head so full 
of empty shapes draped dully over patchwork vines
and other grand reductions

fish-oil-skin crackled over flame
flesh rendered to the worm

such specious little things  we fall with ears open


now de facto phantasms floating in smoke   parlour pretense
establishment of incorporeal form   filled out in color
ink spilled   love splattered on a platter served

and thus
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belcanto2's avatar
How I wish poems such as this - a poet like you - would appear on another newly re-invented site I'm lately frequenting to electrify and magnetize our doddering, often self-important psyches!

This is a powerhouse of metaphoric soul-cry about our human condition. At least, that's how I read it. We the dead apples consumed and consuming, living by rout. Driving/going where?  Such are the modern illusions with which we console/tell ourselves our existence has meaning.  Yes, the ferryman awaits. And I'm supposing the bird/god you/we pray to with all y/our 'refined literary skill' symbolizes a longed for freedom from this excess of delusion, from this excruciating and heightened awareness of our being 'such specious little things'.  And thus.

In admiration, bel.