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hear her on white
waves in a spun room;
fifty six weeks without
and now you're dizzy in your skin
shaking for a fix

but she's an electric ghost-
a digital blip dancing on hypnotic sugar
lips brushing back the change you might have made.
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belcanto2's avatar
Wow! Really good take on the tortured experiences of a relapsed addict - to whatever - drugs, or a particular woman, if one wants to read it that way.  This piece brought Ian's hard hitting  'street and underbelly' poetry to mind for me:

venturus.deviantart.com/

Do you know his work?

Excellent write.