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December 11, 2012
If by ~nawkaman is masterfully written, pausing at pivotal moments to wind down to the poet becoming aware of himself.
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We can
draw lines and give them names
like elements
as they are discovered

Or etch into our skins
this soloecal desire
until it is impossible to tell
where words stop
and life begins.

I would

Find a common rhythm that includes
you in my arms, my hands
and lungs and thoughts
tracing the outline of you
entangled with me
colliding like two lost particles
locked in a shared gravity
drifting through the vacuum
of space.

  I could.

Exhale, and
remember
sentence structure.
Pure, unedited.
© 2012 - 2024 nawkaman
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Chelsinator9000's avatar
I thoroughly enjoy your imagery. The ending couldn't be more perfect nor relatable. I hope you're still writing!