literature

In the cloud ether

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All of my flaws are rented, rendered
into fussy versions
of words spun into splendor;

I am a fraud, fraught
with contemplative curls
and whirled-around turns
into the lonely, dotted sky

and in this air I’m breathing heaving
gasps of any starlight,
leaving lips grazing on
along a faint horizon

caught in the mineral wave.

I will be etched into the sand,
and pass

into the tide of some routine Tuesday
morning when the world no longer wants
to look at itself in a pale moon mirror.
I might be winding down my time on dA. Maybe I’ll change my mind, but I feel like it might be time. I wouldn’t leave completely but maybe just not post any new writings for a good long while.
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curls-and-yelling's avatar
You are my favorite writer, and one of the only ones I still actually read. I'll miss you and I hope your time off does you some good.
I love the first line; "All of my flaws are rented"

okay scratch that, I love the first stanza completely. 

I'll miss you